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jijillian: Julian's Date -2-
Posted by: jijillian on Friday, March 05, 2004 - 07:15 PM Printer Friendly
Julian has to take a bath for his date with Davy--and Marie is going to help!
Julian's Date
Part 2


by jijillian

Chapter 2

Taking His Bath


So Julian went to take a bath. "I really need a bath anyway," he said.

He went to take a shower, actually, not a tub bath. He took off all his clothes while he ran the water to get it hot, and he put his shampoo and soap in the shower stall then he jumped in.

While he got all lathery, he told himself, "I really do want to go to the concert and maybe Marie is just kidding about this and I can go in my own clothes and have fun with Davy."

But thinking about Davy made him think about the things Marie had said and he thought about sucking Davy's cock and his own little dick got hard in the shower and he pulled on it a bit and it felt good. He wondered a little bit what it would be like to have your dick sucked or to suck someone else's. He tried to bend over to see if he could suck his own dick but he couldn't -- he'd tried that before.

Then Marie came into the bathroom and opened the shower curtain and said, "What are you doing? Jerking off? Good idea."

And Julian was so embarrassed that he screamed and his dick got soft right away and Marie yelled back, "I just wanted to see if you need to shave your legs or pits!"

"Get the fuck out of here!" said Julian.

"What the hell?" she said. "Why are you so embarrassed? Like I haven't seen you naked? We used to take baths together just a few years ago you know?"

"That was different," said Julian trying to pull the curtains back but Marie wouldn't let him. Just once, thought Julian, I wish I could hit her. But his parents said he couldn't hit her cause she was a girl and he was a boy. "This so sucks!" he said out loud.

"Not so much," she said. Then she bent over and grabbed his leg and rubbed it and said, "Okay, your legs are pretty smooth already, how's the pits?"

"You're getting all wet," said Julian.

The water was hitting Marie on her head and shoulders and making her top almost transparent. "Yeah, but it's okay, I'm going to take a shower later, too, and these clothes are going into the wash," she said. Then she pulled off her shirt and threw it down on the floor and she stood there in her bra and her slacks.

"Are you looking at my tits?" she asked Julian.

"Well, yeah?" said Julian.

"Well, okay, then, maybe you aren't so much of a faggot," she laughed and sort of picked them up with both hands and made them jiggle and the water that hit Julian splashed on to her but her bra was all shiny and didn't get transparent like her shirt had.

Julian's little dick started getting hard again and he said to himself, she's my sister.

"If I let you play with my tits," said Marie, "would that help you jerk off?"

"I dunno," said Julian not sure he had really heard what he thought he had.

"Yeah, well, I think you should jerk off before this date with Davy, maybe a couple of times cause you don't want to get a hard on while you're wearing a skirt, cause it might show."

"You are so weird," said Julian but Marie was taking off her bra.

"You've got a boner," said Marie looking down. Her boobies bounced a bit as she pulled the bra off and hung it on a towel rack.

"Yeah," said Julian and the water ran off him and down the drain.

Marie took her slacks off and then she just had her panties on cause she didn't have any shoes or socks.

Julian put his hand on his little dick and rubbed it and it felt so good and he looked at his sister's round body and soft titties and he made weird little noises in his throat.

Then Marie got into the shower with him.

Julian shrieked like she had stabbed him.

"Ow!" said Marie and she hit him with her fist, right on that spot on your shoulder where it really hurts. "Damnit! That hurt my ears."

"What if Mom and Dad come home?" he said, feeling very scared and rubbing his shoulder and sucking air cause it hurt.

"They won't, they're doing that thing where they make birdhouses for poor babies or diapers for naked birds or something."

Julian felt like the world had staggered a couple of times and stepped right on top of him.

"You have to do it faster than that," said Marie. "Do you even know how to do this?"

"What?"

"Jerking off," she said, "I'd show you but you're my brother and that would be just too icky."

"You're here in the shower with me -- how do you know how -- never mind!" Julian decided he didn't want a hands-on lesson in jerking off from his sister.

"You have to grab it like you mean it, and rub and stroke it and go fast and slow and then faster. What if Davy wants you to give him a hand job and you don't know how?" Then she made him grab his little dick and pull and rub it really fast a few times and he came with a gasp and a shiver and it squirted onto his leg where the water washed it away.

"Okay," she said, "well, that didn't take long."

"Marie!" said Julian. He gasped a few times and got shower water in his mouth. "You shouldn't...I mean...this is just...!" He sort of sounded like he was gargling.

"We're not having sex so it's not incest" she said, "I've still got my panties on, and I hardly didn't even touch you."

Julian rubbed his shoulder again and glared at her but his eyes wouldn't stay on her face. Her pussy sort of showed right through the wet panties and Julian wondered if he was going to get another hard on. Wanting to look at his sister's pussy just had to be something that would get him in trouble but his dick didn't care.

Marie made a face like she had a bad pain--she really did have a nasty period happening--and Julian looked at her tits and wondered what they felt like. Just the tits, not the period.

"You jerk," she sneered. "You want to feel of them, don't you? Let me see your pits first."

So he lifted his arms and she felt under them and said, "Yeah, we're going to have to shave your pits, you've got a few hairs there."

Julian sort of heard what she had said but he was still looking at her tits with the water running off of them. If he stood just right, the shower water hit his head and made so much noise he couldn't really hear Marie talking and he kind of liked that.

Marie cupped her hands around her tits, "You can't touch them, you're my brother and that would be major ick; but you can watch me." She snickered. "What's really weird is that when I'm having my period my titties get so sensitive that it feels good to rub them."

"Marie," said Julian. He thought his ears were going to meet his eyebrows on the back side of his head, he was so surprised to be watching his sister play with her tits.

She stroked her globes gently and smiled at him. "I bet you'd like to have a pair of these yourself?" she asked.

"No, I wouldn't," he said then licked his lips.

"Play with your own," she ordered him. "Rub your nipples and squeeze'em."

He shook his head, still watching her rub herself.

"Just put your hands on your nipples then," she said, so he did that and then he ended up rubbing them a little and they sort of got like a tiny bit hard.

After a bit she said, "Gotta stop, mine are getting too sensitive. It feels good for a little bit and then it hurts." Marie squirmed. "Besides, we've got to get your pits shaved."

"I'm not gonna shave my pits, that's stupid."

"Look, it's real easy, you're already wet and soapy and you don't have much there anyway. Two or three swipes with the razor and you'll be nice and smooth and you can wear one of my sleeveless dresses."

"I'm not going to wear a dress!"

Marie took a pink razor from a package she reached out and got from outside the shower. She said, "Hold your arms up."

"No." Julian tucked his hands into his pits and hugged himself with his elbows.

Marie pushed him back against the shower wall and began tickling him with hard fingers in his ribs. "C'mon, Julie, put your arms up so I can shave your pits."

Julian was getting another hard-on and both of them were laughing and then somehow, Julian was standing there with his left arm over his head and the right hand on his hard little dick.

Marie shaved that pit and said, "Okay, switch arms."

Julian did so. Now his right hand was in the air and his left hand held his dick. It felt stupid to be standing there with one hand up and one hand down but it felt so odd to get shaved there, he felt more odd than stupid. Marie was right, he had very little hair and it took only a few strokes from the pink razor and he was smooth.

And without doing much at all with his dick, he came again and his white stuff went onto the wall this time.

"Gross," said Marie. "Wash it off."

Julian sprayed the spot on the wall with the shower nozzle and washed the white stuff off.

Marie smiled. Julian did almost anything she told him to, anyway, and she knew she could make him dress in her clothes and wait for Davy to show up. It would be a good joke on both of them and she felt mean enough right now to want to do it.

It would serve both of them right for being boys and not having periods and laughing when she had hers. She reached up and turned the shower nozzle to off so the spray stopped. "I've decided," she said. "You're going to shave your legs, too. It'll be good practice."

Julian's head wobbled like he had been hit with something harder than a toy dog. He wished he had the noise of the shower in his ears again and hadn't heard what she said. "What? You said I didn't have to -- practice for what?"

"You're going to be my regular substitute, it is just too perfect," said Marie.

"No one's... I'm not... you're crazy!"

"Here," she handed him the razor and he took it with the dick hand and then she knelt in the shower to rub soap on his legs. It was probably an accident that one of her tits sort of hit him on the end of the dick on the way down.

He groaned. After jerking off twice, he was really sensitive and it was almost like -- well, it wasn't really like anything except having your sister's tit bop the end of your dick when it is already really sensitive and you're feeling very strange and strangely horny.

"There," she said, standing back up. "Your legs are all soapy, right down to your toes and up almost to your balls. She handed him the soap, "Finish soaping yourself up, I am not going to."

Julian took the soap and decided that Marie would probably hit or tickle him if he didn't do it so he soaped himself good, which he was going to do anyway. He even soaped his balls and the little bit of fur he had in his crotch.

Marie said, "Next time, remember to start at your ankles, or your feet if you've got hair on your feet.... You don't, good."

"I'm not going... " he tried to say.

But Marie said, "Yes, you are." She handed him the razor.

He shrugged and started working on his legs.

"Shave up, it's easier and it gets more of the hair off. You'll be super smooth." Her tits jiggled right in front of Julian's face as she bent over to criticize how he did the job.

The soap on his cock and balls made them slippery between his legs and he squeezed his legs together some while he worked because it sort of felt good, as long as nothing touched the end of his dick again for a while.

With Marie telling him how, he shaved his legs up to his thighs. "Hair is so gross," said Marie.

Julian nodded and Marie smiled. "Get rid of all of the hair," she said. "All the way up."

He looked at her. "I don't want to shave my balls."

"Shave them, they're all hairy and gross," she ordered. They weren't really, Julian hardly had any hair there at all.

"What if I cut myself?"

"Don't be a baby, it's safe to use a razor down there and I'm right here to call 911 if you need it," she grinned.

Julian felt silly. "I will shave my balls if you will shave your pussy," he said.

"Stupid," said Marie. "I'm having my period, I can't do that right now."

"Oh, yeah," said Julian. He looked very disappointed but then gave a weak grin. If she couldn't then he wouldn't have to either. "If you won't shave yourself there then I won't either."

"Well, you should be real smooth there so he will feel like you're really a girl, and then he'll rub you there and you can come, too," said Marie.

"What?" Jason kept thinking Marie wouldn't say something and then she went ahead and said something he never thought of her saying.

"He might feel weird, you know, jerking you off, if you had a hairy set of balls like he has," Marie explained.

"He's got hairy balls?" said Julian.

"Yeah, really hairy," Marie nodded. "But he doesn't like hair on his girlfriends..."

"I'm not going to be his girlfriend!"

"Yes, you are!"

"Marie! You're his girlfriend and you're making me crazy!"

"We can both be his girlfriend, he'll like that!"

"I'm a boy!"

"If you suck his dick--I guarantee--he won't care!"

That stopped Julian for a minute while he tried to get his head around the idea.

"But if you want him to get you off, you'll have to be smooth as you can be down there," said Marie. "Smooth like me."

"You said you couldn't shave..."

Marie nodded, "I can't shave now cause I'm on my period but he makes me shave down there and stay smooth anyway." Actually, she had shaved herself once and then discovered that letting it grow back out itched too much and now she had to shave her pussy whenever she shaved her legs. She figured it might work the same with Julian.

"You shaved it?"

"Sure, lots of girls and some guys do. If I show you that I did it, you'll do it too?"

Julian nodded without really thinking about it.

Marie took off her wet panties. She had only a little patch of hair just above her pussy. Julian stared, there were white strings hanging out of Marie's crotch.

"Hair grows back. We've done sillier stuff and this is sort of fun, isn't it?" she grinned.

She was completely naked now, and Julian had not seen his sister like that for several years. And the white strings fascinated him.

He felt his dick trying to get hard again. "I guess it is sort of fun, in a stupid way," he admitted.

Marie laughed. "You're staring at me, is it the strings from my tampon?"

He nodded. "I've never seen that before."

"Boys are damn lucky they don't have to cram something up inside of them so they don't bleed on their clothes," said Marie in a really mad voice.

"Ouch," said Julian, just thinking about it hurt.

"Okay," said Marie. "So we're having fun and since I already shaved my pussy, then you'll shave off all of your hair down there, too."

Again, not really thinking about it, Julian said, "Yeah, I guess."

Marie handed him a fresh pink razor. "Always use a new one for this part," she said.

Julian swallowed hard. But he had agreed to do it, so he shaved his balls and the area around his dick very carefully. After seeing his sister's shaved pussy, his little dick had gotten hard again and it sort of stayed out of the way all by itself.

He had read somewhere that you could bleed to death from getting wounded down there and he was pretty sure that a pink plastic razor would not make a deep enough gash to need the paramedics, still....

Marie took the shower nozzle and turned it back on and rinsed them both off. "Now we're both all smooth," she said.

It felt weird, though it hadn't been long ago when smooth was just normal.

"You're blushing," said Marie.

"Well, yeah," said Julian. He still had a hard on.

"Jerk yourself off again, or I'll do it," Marie warned.

It took longer this time and it almost hurt. "I think it may be broken," said Julian sadly after pulling and pushing for several minutes.

"No, it's not," said Marie. "You just have to think about something that makes you hot."

"I don't think that's going to work," said Julian. "I've never jerked off so much before."

Marie realized threats wouldn't work so she stopped talking mean to Julian and said, "Why do you want to go on this date with Davy, anyway?"

"I dunno," said Julian. "At first it was just cause I don't get to go anywhere and you do. And now I don't think I want to go at all."

"Well, you like Davy, don't you?"

"Uh, I guess."

"I think he likes you," said Marie, grinning at him.

Julian looked at her suspiciously then snorted. "Can I stop this? It's like rubbing your foot with broken glass now?" He meant trying to jerk off for a third time in twenty minutes. His description even made Marie wince.

"Okay, okay," she said. "You can do it again later."

Julian stopped pulling on his little dick and pushed Marie. "Get out, get out."

"Stop pushing me!" Marie squealed and pushed back. They were both naked and wet and this was a really stupid thing to be doing in a shower stall.

Julian went down with a yelp and a thump as his head hit the tile wall of the shower stall. Marie screamed and put her hands over her mouth. She thought she had killed her brother.

"Ow! Ow, ow, ow, ow!" Julian howled. He put his hands on the back of his head because it really hurt.

"Oh, you're all right!" said Marie. "Get up!" She was relieved that Julian wasn't seriously hurt.

Annoyed and lying on the wet shower floor, Julian tried to kick Marie. "You get out!" he said.

"Julie!" Marie screamed. "Stop that!" She tried to back out of the stall but Julian's kicking tripped her and she fell right on top of him. His head hit the wall again and Marie's elbow got him right in the pit of his stomach.

"Ooo!" said Julian because all the air got knocked out of him.

They lay there for a moment, realizing they were both naked and Marie was on top of Julian. Then they exploded, trying to get up and get untangled from each other at the same time.

Julian put a hand on his sister's breast and pushed her off of him. It felt sort of soft and rubbery and that distracted him for a moment.

She squealed like a cat being ground into dog food and tried to bite him. Then she hit him in the ear with her fist and tried to knee him in the nuts. She was having her period and her nipples were too tender for someone to be pushing on them like that.

They both used all the cuss words they knew, Julian learned a few new ones, then they started all over again, yelling and grunting.

Being wet and slippery, on the wet and slippery tile, neither of them was being very effective. They both fell down a lot. Marie being bigger and stronger and having the better position seemed to be winning. Julian grabbed her long hair and pulled as hard as he could because she had her hands around his throat.

Marie gasped, Julian gurgled, and then in the relative quiet, they both heard it--the front doorbell ringing and then the sound of the front door of the house opening and closing.

to be continued...

Note: TG masturbation deals femdom shaving rated-x
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Re: Julian's Date -2- (Score: 1)
by Wanda on Mar 06, 2004 - 04:21 PM
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Do I detect a tongue hiding behind someone's cheek teeth? ;>

And no one else has commented on the pun in the title. Devious. I feel so clever. <{{;>

Wanda



Re: Julian's Date -2- (Score: 1)
by Admin on Mar 06, 2004 - 07:49 PM
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I noticed it but I didn't say anything. :) Why tempt jiji to even worse puns?

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Re: Julian's Date -2- (Score: 0)
by Guest Reader on Mar 06, 2004 - 10:50 PM
This story is cynical and stupid. It plays upon all of the worst aspects of our "interests"... Does that make the author/reader/them/ wrong? No. We continue to be what we read. This story is "crap" but it still fufills a need. My fondest hope is that , someday it will not.



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Re: Julian's Date -2- (Score: 1)
by jijillian on Mar 06, 2004 - 11:22 PM
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heh heh heheh heh

you said crap

jiji ^j^


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Re: Julian's Date -2- (Score: 1)
by jijillian on Mar 06, 2004 - 11:21 PM
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what's a pun?

jiji ^j^


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Giggle, giggle. (Score: 1)
by Angel (angelohare@earthlink.net)
on Mar 16, 2004 - 12:47 PM
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Such SATIRE! Such annoying little scenes! Such a whimp and all I can think of is that dude who plays Raymond on TV. Now he would fit right into a story like this! I can picture him as Julian real easy. Giggle

Now who rings the doorbell and then walks right into a house? I guess I will see, I am on to part three!

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Re: Giggle, giggle. (Score: 1)
by jijillian on Mar 16, 2004 - 02:44 PM
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satire? whuzzat? ^j^

i've actually been thinking of a teenage version of the kid who did home alone to play both julian and marie - jijillian ^j^


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