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| The Serendiptiy of Freedom -11- Things Fall Apart... | Login/Create an account | 6 Comments | |
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Re: The Serendiptiy of Freedom -11- Things Fall Apart...
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by Jerrie526 on Aug 03, 2003 - 09:31 AM (User info | Send a message) http:// |
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My Gawd Lisa, Just when I thought things might be settling down a bit, you come out and scare the living daylights out of me in this part: You end a chapter before I am ready for it to end. Now I am going to have to wait for the next part to find out if our favorite heroine can get herself out of this mess. Good Job! Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us. Jerrie |
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Re: The Serendiptiy of Freedom -11- Things Fall Apart...
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by Jerrie526 on Aug 03, 2003 - 09:58 AM (User info | Send a message) http:// |
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Additional comment Lisa, I do not know who to be more angry with over the death of Cheryl: You for killing her off or the TFN people for being so heartless as to murder her in cold blood. If it had been a war or something like that, I would not have been that bothered by it. But to just shoot her... <crying over the death of a friend> Jerrie |
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Re: The Serendiptiy of Freedom -11- Things Fall Apart...
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by Guest Reader on Aug 04, 2003 - 04:27 AM |
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i am kinda dissapointed about WHERE you ended this i actually thought about opening up a thesaurus and seeing how many variations of the F and A words... but, on the other hand, how did they get onto the planet without being detected? |
| Re: The Serendiptiy of Freedom -11- Things Fall Apart... (Score: 1) by Lisa_Grey on Aug 04, 2003 - 05:37 AM (User info | Send a message) http://hometown.aol.com/lcaitlingrey/index.html |
| WOW! Upset you did it? Sorry, that wasn't my intent. As to how they got on the planet, well, that will be explained. The story isn't over, it's just pausing until the next part gets posted. Hang in there. It'll be over soon, all wrapped up nice and neat and then you'll be crying about the lack of additional parts, lol. Or maybe not. *hugs* Lisa =O) |
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Re: The Serendiptiy of Freedom -11- Things Fall Apart...
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by Guest Reader on Aug 05, 2003 - 04:32 AM |
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PLEASE ! PLEASE !! PLEASE !!! Please continue this story! I have to know what happens. I loved it.it's very well done and I love how you end the segments in such a way as to keep the reader's interest. :) |
| Re: The Serendiptiy of Freedom -11- Things Fall Apart... (Score: 1) by Lisa_Grey on Aug 05, 2003 - 06:44 AM (User info | Send a message) http://hometown.aol.com/lcaitlingrey/index.html |
| =O) Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. And the pleading is nice too, lol. Rest assured, the story will be completed. Hang in there. *grin* *hugs* Lisa Grey |
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