hmmm, that's scary, lol. Sounds a bit like "as expected, good story" Gosh, does that put the pressure on or what?
LOL, Thanks. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
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Lisa
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Re: The Serendipity of Freedom -10- Homecoming
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by Chayraine on Jul 27, 2003 - 07:34 PM
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As I had said before, just not fast enough writing to sooth the savage eyes for this story 8) Ok, I said it different before.
But I will add that this is definitely one of the best multi-part story that I can remember reading that is not a published novel. And even further it is up in the top of my list of all great stories. Truely a publishable work.
I also feel I should add that you have so nicely twisted events just enough to make them seem perfectly in place, yet keeping me from figuring them out before they happened. I was wondering how you were going to get Capt. Edmonds on the other side and that twist caught me by a bit of suprise.
