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| Magic Mirror, Tell Me True | Login/Create an account | 3 Comments | |
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Re: Magic Mirror, Tell Me True
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by Admin on Jun 15, 2003 - 01:00 AM (User info | Send a message) http://bigcloset.ateros.com |
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This is an excellent story, I read it twice in the same sitting. The only things wrong with it are that I want a sequel (it doesn't require one) and I was so wrapped up in reading it I forgot to proofread. :) - Erin |
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Re: Magic Mirror, Tell Me True
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by aardvark on Jun 15, 2003 - 07:50 PM (User info | Send a message) http://www.alltel.net/~dbeaton/ |
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This is an excellent story. Wonderfull smooth, descriptive writing with a purpose. You certainly described the mood and captured the feeling. I was going point out that the ending was a bit vague, but then I re-read the ending again. It didn't really matter. You described the end result: KC will eventually become a girl somehow. The precise way doesn't really matter and indeed, would be almost mundane after this. This was the magical, life changing event - the key to it all. Great story. |
| Re: Magic Mirror, Tell Me True (Score: 1) by Admin on Jun 16, 2003 - 12:53 AM (User info | Send a message) http://bigcloset.ateros.com |
| That's it! That's why it works so well. Thanks, Doug. - Erin |
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